"Sometimes, I’d like to leave my dreams," she replied, gently tracing the outline of his face with her fingers. Her silky hair fell to her waist, and he smiled lovingly at her. She smiled back. It was March, and the air was ripe with opportunity. An ancient gnarled tree stood witness to the Sacred Exchange, and the apples dangling from it fell like golden delicious raindrops onto the ground. He picked one up, admiring its smooth glittering skin, and bit into it with a crunch. The juice slid down his chin. She looked at him, horrified at what he had just done. He stood, extended his palms to her, and whispered, “Darling, this is where I leave you. I will love you forever. Goodbye.”
But all she could remember is sobbing wildly, screaming into his neck over and over again, as he walked away from her to a place she couldn’t be in, a dreamlike place where the apples were ripe all year long.
24 comments:
Mmm.. interesting story. Did you write it yourself??
Wow, this is so whimsical. I actually love it. Did you write this? x
oh wow. great story. Lovely post!
I don't want to repeat the question, but did you write it? Because it's really good.
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Lovely post and interesting, very dreamy pictures.
Yes, I did write it! Thank you all for your comments! xx
I fell in love with the words..
you are talented, please write a book. I'll buy it i swear!x
one of my favorite movies of the same name.. lovely!
Oh wow. That was beautiful.
Thanks for the comment on my blog. Am following.
oh wow. beautiful!
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Such a lovely blog you have here-had to follow :D
Love the horsey photo!!! xxxxxxx
lovely.
beautiful post :) x
This is a beautiful tale, it's somewhat haunting- I love it!
thank you for stopping by!! your blog is so precious:)
i love the whimsical, airy feeling of this post. you really captured the spirit of the title. thanks for the follow!
Hi darling, if you'd like to be penpals with me then send me your adress on my email ( karigirl_k@hotmail.com )and expect the first envelope :)
Your words are always so powerful and full of magic. You're incedibly talented :)
Wow, this is beautiful! I love the little collection of photographs at the top.
You are positively magical. What a lovely blog you have here. :)
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love the way you write...i fell in love with this story..hope to read more from you! lovely pics.
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Thank you all so much for your kind comments! xx
cute pictures, love the dreamy colours.
thanks for your comment on my blog! have a great weekend xx
I adore this movie!
And your blog is a dream. I'm so happy you found mine or else I don't know if I would have found yours.
I especially love your stories- they are beautiful.
Have a lovely weekend and I look forward to reading more <3
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